I could never tally the amount of lessons you've taught me, nor could I ever be able to amass such a quality of teachings in my lifetime. You've not only been a great father and taught me the moral rights and wrongs, but you've taught me what it takes to express and show those rights and wrongs. As a coach, you've taught me the fundamentals of both Football and Basketball, and have led me to so many victories, both on and off the court. I can still remember the first time we stepped on a Basketball court together. I remember the chill I got up my spine when I first picked up the ball and shot it, and especially during my first game. The light brown court was filled with loud squeaking and shouting from sneakers and players. The air had no smell to it, but was infinitely refreshing due to the open door in the gymnasium leading to the cold snowy grounds outside. I can remember the time that I fell into a pool when I was so young I couldn't count my age on both hands, and you jumped in and saved my life. There are so many favors and things you've done for me over the years that I simply cannot repay nor replicate.
Before you had taught me all that you have I was simply a boy. A boy that was naive and very young. I was thoughtless and with little to no inspiration. I had very few joys that weren't all in my own imagination and I had very little clue what an idol or mentor was let alone having one at all. Before you taught me all that you knew, I was a little Padawan to your Jedi Master. I was simply too young and too foolish to ever understand anything, and yet though I'm only eighteen, I am very proud in knowing that I am one of the more mature eighteen year olds out there. I always use the logic you taught me, I always stay disciplined both on and off the court, I always show respect, and more importantly I ALWAYS lead by example. You truly have shaped me into the athlete, thinker, and overall individual that I am today. From all of the little things you've taught me to the massive lessons you've drilled in my head, I thank you from now 'till forever.
I'll love ya forever,
Tyler.
I'll love ya forever,
Tyler.
Pops and I
from me to you
I know sometimes its not always easy to see
you're always up to those things you do
but I've always appreciated what you've done for me
which is why I'm writing this, from me to you
I know you're the athlete in the family
you taught me everything I knew
its hard to live up to what you want me to be
what you've done for me is more than I could ever do
You taught me how to be a true man
I guess chivalry will never die in your eyes
without manners, in your house I'd be banned
and you showed me how confidence is just a guise
Confidence was always the game plan
through practice is how I shall rise
without it I'm better off throwing my dreams in the can
"sportsmanship is what I can preach and advise"
I love all the possibilities you taught me to see
I couldn't repay you for being so true
being a leader in life is what is key
so dad I'd like to give praise, from me to you
And you showed me right from wrong
but only expect success if you fight all year long
You told me that I cannot ever give up
that an non acted on dream is sleep
no matter whether afar, or close up
only if you act, those blessings will you reap
And of all the things, you told me remember three
dream on, be yourself and forever fight through
things are always bigger than you and me
So thank you once again, as a mentor and a friend
Thats why I'm writing this poem, from me to you.
Tyler,
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem and letter - very sincere, heartfelt, and well-crafted. Your writing skills really shine in this post, and I'm sure your father would appreciate the kinds words and true sentiment.
Great job on crafting a letter that is true to the bone and structurally cohesive.
Your poem is very creative, and it has a great flow. Lots of great rhymes and, again, a solid structure (or rhyme scheme) to take the reader to the end. It's very thoughtful, and I think that you put a lot of effort into it - clearly. That's key.
I'm not sure why your first paragraph and the last sentences are whited out. Again, I can highlight the text to see it, but this needs to be fixed. It's a design flaw. If a reader came across this, they'd be confused, and they likely wouldn't continue to read. They'd think there was an error on the page.
Is it just a white highlight over the white font? I'm not sure what's going on, but try to tinker with Blogger to figure it out - to improve your design. Click "Preview" before you post, and you can see what your final post will look like before publishing.
Also, you must include at least 3 images and pictures per post. Here, you have one, which is great. Just add a couple more to improve your design and enhance the look of your post.
Overall, a good improvement. You've got the words, now let's ramp up the design next week.
GR: 84
Fixed it up, and shouldn't have any more design flaws. Also, I never knew about the preview button, slipped my vision I guess, but that aught to definitely help me out
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